冬廟煙沈水，綠人殊可愛。飛鳥暗停佇。好花顏色黛。我今坐香案，已伺晨光晦。親朋久不來，歌者悠然在。
In winter temple, the smoke sinks into the water, and the lady of greenness is quite comely,
The birds secretly stay, and beautiful flowers have dark blue pigments.
I’m sitting on incense burner table today, waiting for the light of dawn to become obscure,
Relatives and friends, they don’t come; but the singing man lingers with ease.
注：为照顾中国传统背景小说，将欧洲传说形象绿人the green man改为the lady of greenness。
東方朔 《神異經》：「北方有冰萬里，厚百丈，有鼷鼠在冰下出焉。」
寶鑒冬時煙許許。杜宇聲聲愁似汝。那堪人送舊菊花。惜伴侶，商略雨，枕上巫山歸夢去。
香雪載筐人不語。神女漱芳停月杼。淨銀甌內幾枝斜。同誰敘，天裂處，百丈寒冰出鼷鼠。
There is smoke from the treasured mirror in winter,
The chirpings of cuckoos sound as poignant as you.
How can I bear that someone sent me old chrysanthemums?
Cherish my companion, and discuss about the rain,
Dream of a dream on the pillow of Wu Shan.
In the basket there are many snowflakes, and people don’t talk.
The goddess washes the petals and suspends the loom of the moon.
And see how many flowers are leaning in the clean silver vase.
I should tell whom that the sky cracks,
Under cold ice of thousands of inches here wander the mammoths.
注：鼷鼠，现代学者认为是猛犸象或者麝牛。