今天是南北组五岁生日，写了一篇甜甜的小短文，有错误请指出。中文翻译版等下给出。
The rain ,since it started ,has never shown the possibility to stop .An atmosphere filled the nameless city ,cool and quiet .
At the corner around a shop was seated a 15-year-old girl ,named Luo Tianyi ,with grey hair ,crying and grieved .
Cars ,buses and bikes was running in front of Tianyi ,and countless passerby walked meanwhile ,showing little concern to Tianyi .
Another girl with long long plait ,seemingly aged about 16 ,looked at Tianyi continuously ,keeping an umbrella .
'Aling !'Tianyi sobbed ,'I feel ...... I feel all over the world betrayed me ......'
Yuezheng Ling heared ,thinking of what to say ,and merely replied :'Tianyi !'
Aling knew that Tianyi lost the College Entrance Examination ,which means she had no access to X University that she had appointed with Aling before .
'It doesn't mean you lose everything .It should be a new start ,instead of a painful end ,you know .'spoke Aling .
Tianyi waved her head ,and said :'My parents denied all my works ...... and believed it`s because of my interest ... that led to my failure ... Aling ! Maybe I shall leave from you when the Autumn comes !'
Afterwards ,Tianyi stood up ,looking at Aling ,hardly to stop crying .
'Cheer up Tianyi !'said Aling ,'I`ll accompany with you for your college time ,for throughout our lives and for ... forever ! '
'Aling !'Tianyi spoke lightly .
Aling held Tianyi`s hand ,and twittered :'When you are lonely ,watch the spaces between your fingers ,do remember that's where mine fit perfectly .'