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Sinner's soliloquy
by Shaxpya
No, no, sinner, ride not so fast,
For those pit in the night shade I'm unprepared
Shall fail me and make this breath my last.
But my ride I concerned more with my life compared.
In such disgrace it's not allowed to fall.
And there's no righteous reason on earth to leave my
Beloved companion, but ill will befalled
The wretched mind the naked truth denied.
And when the reminiscence falls it pours,
So clear and piercing, like the rain drop fierce.
Grant them overwhelm me, from pain to sore,
And drown the wakeful anguish, with quiet tears.
All that I used to well knew, yet not knew well,
To shun the heaven that leadeth me to this hell.


IP属地:上海1楼2014-08-23 13:56回复
    本人大三,高三开始因为酷爱说唱的押韵艺术,后来渐渐喜欢上英国诗歌,尤其格律诗。
    这首花了一天不到的时间,而且为了追求sonnet格律上的严谨牺牲了很多想表达的内容。。。勉强能算是首sonnet吧?最后一行亦是引借莎翁的诗句。。


    IP属地:上海2楼2014-08-23 13:56
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      2025-07-29 00:40:58
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      哎,背后的故事太多。简单来讲是表达我的自责吧,因为一时的过度自卑和消极而做出了错误的决定,深深伤害了一个人。从后面的rain drop fierce开始就是再讲我那天淋着暴雨时的感受。从内心的pain到皮肤的sore,从内在的anguish到外在的tear,以及quiet tear和暴雨的对比……


      IP属地:上海来自iPhone客户端3楼2014-08-23 14:21
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